She cared for her
With a mother’s heart
Though they were only
A decade apart
They hugged as they slept
On one small cot
Sharing a pillow and a tear
Cringing at the noise
Covering their ears
Pretending to sleep
The words were loud
And cut so deep
An abusive time
With each others love
They grew close
Then life changed
New lives began
Their paths were severed
Moving toward a better day
Lives changed forever
She laid her head upon
The soft mound of fluff
That is solely hers
And her heart beats alone.

How sweet but sad all at the same time. Beautiful.
ReplyDeleteLove this! Beautiful!!
ReplyDeleteI agree with Kim.
ReplyDeleteBeautifully written, beautifully laid out. Thanks for the poetic respite in a hectic day. :-)
ReplyDeleteDid you write this one Cindy? It is just beautiful...a lovely picture of sisters helping each other grow up. Well done!
ReplyDeleteChris
Cynthia - this is just lovely...I have the same question as Chris - did you write it? You should enter it in a poetry contest!
ReplyDeleteSwati
I love all of you Ladies!:-)
ReplyDeleteYou humble me with your kind and thoughtful comments. They are appreciated.
Thank you, my Kimmie. You make me smile :-)
Lori and Suzette, thank you so much for your kind thoughts. :-) You are awesome gals.
Jamie, I am happy to refresh your day. Thank you, friend.
To Chris and Swati, the answer is yes. I did write this poem. My sister and I, (she lives out of state) rarely communicate anymore and I miss her so much. And one day, while I thought of her, these words came to me.
Thank you all for following and leaving comments.
How absolutely beautiful!
ReplyDeleteI am impressed with your writing: I don't think you are "practicing" writing here but actually succeeding quite nicely!
And the site itself is beautiful!!