Image by Sheepback.Cabin via FlickrI loved you in the long ago,
My heart was yours forever.
We shared life as sated as we might,
Tho, it really did not matter.
For, it ran away with the wind
Leaving my heart soaring.
The freedom of my soul,
Spun like a disc, out of control.
When will we intertwine?
Will we share this space again?
Will it happen?
Am I dreaming?
Can I just pretend?
My heart was yours forever.
We shared life as sated as we might,
Tho, it really did not matter.
For, it ran away with the wind
Leaving my heart soaring.
The freedom of my soul,
Spun like a disc, out of control.
When will we intertwine?
Will we share this space again?
Will it happen?
Am I dreaming?
Can I just pretend?
You have a beautiful way with words! I love it!!
ReplyDeleteLori
Your last phrase "Can I just Pretend" is what inspired me to write my latest blog post.
ReplyDeleteYou are an inspiration!!
Love ya,
Lori
This looks like a verse that might go nicely at the start of a novel or story anthology?
ReplyDeleteI feel like the subject of this poem passed away. ('Will we share this space again?') If that's true, and the poem is from life, I'm sorry.
- Corra
The Victorian Heroine
Lori, I appreciate you so much. I'm happy you found inspiration in my words and I love what you've done with that last line. It's beautiful!
ReplyDeleteCorra, thank you. Yes, this may be used in book three of my trilogy.
Your observations are so right and it was long ago, but a very sad time.